"THIS IS PERFECT. I can't believe a teenager wrote this! this is such a perfect narrative poem--you picked the exact details to magnify and describe in detail, and it worked flawlesslt. Your sentences, your syntax...all incredible."
"I really liked the way in which you expressed the simple idea of having someone to take away the loneliness. Your rhyme scheme is very well done, and the poem has a great rhythm. Plus, it's short and sweet."
"Wow, I am blown away by the way in which you express your thoughts. It is so unexpected and so out of the ordinary. And you're able to fit a rhyme scheme into a poem filled with such abstract imagery."