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Natalie Gomez
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The Stunter
Started this discussion. Last reply by elman sirin Apr 15, 2011. 1 Reply 0 Likes
It was bright, as bright as it would be if he were in a room full of lights,Extremely bright lights,He ran down the alley as fast as he could,But could he escape once again?He felt the rush,As if it…Continue
The Correct Path
Started this discussion. Last reply by Natalie Gomez Mar 25, 2011. 2 Replies 0 Likes
What did I ever do to you, you ask?What didn't you do to me,I mean like you treated me like crap,and you expected me to be okay?Well guess what?!That isn't going to happen because one day,you'll turn…Continue
Today(California)
Started Mar 21, 2011 0 Replies 0 Likes
Today,The clouds cried,The whole day,What could’ve happened?No one knew,Only the cloud itself knew,The rain yelled,As it hit the ground and dispersed as it hit the floor,As if it had been let go…Continue
Ode to Bed (California)
Started Mar 21, 2011 0 Replies 0 Likes
Bed,You are always there when I need you,In bad times,Good,Mad,Sad,Funny,Awesome,Tiring,And best of all,Sleepy times.Bed,You make me dream,And sometimes,I have a bad dream,But you wake me up,To make…Continue
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elman sirin replied to Natalie Gomez's discussion The Stunter"If you want to see much more, you should come to Istanbul!
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Natalie Gomez posted a discussionThe Stunter
It was bright, as bright as it would be if he were in a room full of lights,Extremely bright lights,He ran down the alley as fast as he could,But could he escape once again?He felt the rush,As if it were to attack him once more,The adrenaline filled his veins,Could he make it?He wouldn’t know if he didn’t try,And if he didn’t it was over,Once again,During his run,He was to commit a crazy stunt,Once more as usual,That’s why he was the Lance “The Stunter” StarkWhile being chased to lose the…See More
Natalie Gomez replied to Natalie Gomez's discussion Isn't this supposed to be home? (LA, CA)"thanks!"
Gabby Goldberg replied to Natalie Gomez's discussion Isn't this supposed to be home? (LA, CA)"Such a powerful poem Natalie! Because the writing is so clear, yet detailed, I really understood exactly how you feel. Fantastic job--- I really admire your bravery to put this up, it was a great read!"
Natalie Gomez replied to Siyolise Nyondo's discussion untiteled (South Africa)"this is so good! Keep writing!"
Natalie Gomez replied to Kelsey Allen-Niesen's discussion I Am From (LA)"this is really good! keep writing!"
Natalie Gomez replied to Danielle Shapiro's discussion Not Reality (California)"this is really GOOD!! keep writing, i like how you mentioned the bubble! I LOVE the last line! It really makes a fantastic closing to the poem!"
Natalie Gomez replied to Natalie Gomez's discussion Isn't this supposed to be home? (LA, CA)"thanks!!"
Ariel F. replied to Natalie Gomez's discussion Isn't this supposed to be home? (LA, CA)"This is really good. I love the last line!!!"
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- What brings you here?
- Well. Mr. Trivas is my advocate and teacher so i like writing poems.
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Elwood L. Roy replied to Elwood L. Roy's discussion The Company of Myself"Thank you so much =) I'm always happy to hear how others interpret my writing/poetry!"
Willow Naomi Curry replied to Joseph Hindogbae Kposowa's discussion NATIVE LIFE CUT (Sierra Leone)"THIS IS PERFECT. I can't believe a teenager wrote this! this is such a perfect narrative poem--you picked the exact details to magnify and describe in detail, and it worked flawlesslt. Your sentences, your syntax...all incredible."
Willow Naomi Curry replied to Elwood L. Roy's discussion The Company of Myself"I really liked the way in which you expressed the simple idea of having someone to take away the loneliness. Your rhyme scheme is very well done, and the poem has a great rhythm. Plus, it's short and sweet."
Willow Naomi Curry replied to Avital's discussion I'm from New York"This is a great example of a narrative, slice of life poem. Excellent job. Love the rhythm of this."
Willow Naomi Curry replied to Zianna Milito's discussion The Star"Wow, I am blown away by the way in which you express your thoughts. It is so unexpected and so out of the ordinary. And you're able to fit a rhyme scheme into a poem filled with such abstract imagery."
Willow Naomi Curry replied to nedu'u's discussion Episode"I really love the words that you use; they are bursting with imagery."
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